Initial Ideas For Question 1

Eunice's Reflection On Editing 30/11/2015

What I Did Today ? By Eunice

Target Audience's Feedback From Rough Cut By Eunice

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Rough Cut Reflection

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Things We need To Improve By Next Week

1. More use of Jump Cuts in  the argument scene.
2. Introduce the sky Garden's scene close to the end of the video.
3. Fix the the colour of the two different scenes of sarene in the white background : The medium long shot is white while the medium close up is a bit yellow, as shown below:
   
   
   
   
4. Second Chorus : more variety of shots of Sarene to be introduced and put some shots of zhara and Kazeem Arguing.

Feedback From Class and Teacher

Good things about the music video

1. Very good controlled use of camera
2. Mise-en-scene , slow motion and shot types convey the story very well : the viewers can clearly see that something went wrong in the romantic relationship. 
3. Editing to beat was clear and effective to convey meaning.

Things To Improve By Next Week:

•  Fix the lip sync of Sarene in the second chorus.
• Cut the the last part of the first scene in the music video because the camera movement is a bit jerky.
•  Make the argument scene more jumpy to show that atmosphere changed. To contrast it to the happy scene
• Finish the music video !