Evaluation Q4 - Dazhane

You can view our rough cut edit music video >HERE<

This is the our audience feedback to our rough cut edit

Alongside Class and Teacher feedback below

Good things about the music video

1. Very good controlled use of camera
2. Mise-en-scene , slow motion and shot types convey the story very well : the viewers can clearly see that something went wrong in the romantic relationship. 
3. Editing to beat was clear and effective to convey meaning.

Things To Improve By Next Week:

•  Fix the lip sync of Sarene in the second chorus.
• Cut the the last part of the first scene in the music video because the camera movement is a bit jerky.
•  Make the argument scene more jumpy to show that atmosphere changed. To contrast it to the happy scene
• Finish the music video !

The main points to take away from the feedback were:
1) The first establishing shot in the beginning was very effective
2) Overall, conveying the storyline was successful
IMPROVEMENTS:
- Establishing shot in the beginning was abit jerky and either needed to be taken out completely or fixed
- More jump cuts( in the arguement) and variations in movement and shot types with Sarene ( The artist).
- Fix slight out of sync with artist and music

medium from Dazhane fleming on Vimeo.