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Friday, 27 November 2015

Things We need To Improve By Next Week


  1. More use of Jump Cuts in  the argument scene.
  2. Introduce the sky Garden's scene close to the end of the video.
  3. Fix the the colour of the two different scenes of sarene in the white background : The medium long shot is white while the medium close up is a bit yellow, as shown below:

  4. Second Chorus : more variety of shots of Sarene to be introduced and put some shots of zhara and Kazeem Arguing.

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